| Reviews for Lust Driven By Longing |
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rachie1277 2/17/13 . chapter 10I feel this chapter was a bit rushed but still really good! I enjoyed it much! Update soon :) |
rachie1277 2/4/13 . chapter 8Noooooo! I don't like how Aiden moved on so fast :/ Or is he just trying to make him jealous?! O: Either way, it was quite quick of a decision for Aiden to turn around and kiss another guy for w/e reason. Update soon! |
holywillows 1/26/13 . chapter 7noooooo aiden come back :o |
Anon 1/6/13 . chapter 2 Nice chapter, but Aiden is right: "Quelle est votre ville natale comme ?" doesn't actually mean anything. It's "A quoi ressemble votre ville natale ?" or "Décrivez votre ville natale." Otherwise, I like the story so far. |
amywils 1/4/13 . chapter 1I have edited this to be all in first person, but it hasn't seemed to have uploaded :/ sorry! |
Guest 1/3/13 . chapter 1 You keep switching, not enough to get confused but still |