O.O Nerf gun? CC?

XD NO WAY! Will be waiting for the next one ahaha Ok A cliff hanger? o.o Oh wells, in any case, I'd like to see what happens next hahaha Nicely done!

Nice story so far! I really wonder how they will avert the impending crisis...
I love how Ryan snatches a cookie in THAT situation! The romance in chapter 18 turned out very cute.
Especially the first few chapters could do with some proofreading though... The sentences don't start with capital letters most of the time and some other things are off as well. Also, you could simply mention whose point of view it is at the beginning of each chapter to make reading easier!
BTW, whatsoever happened to Rainas job? I don't remember her returning to it after that first chapter...

That's really good for your first romancey scene. I like it!

Oooooohhhh *Sigh* Safe! But now they have to deal with an alien invasion o.o The public didn't believe them, and now I wonder if they will o.o Hopefully they will *sigh* Will be waiting :D

I like it! Please keep updating, even though I know you will!

Uh-oh Quick! Tell me what happens next! """ Will be waiting :D

What?! """"""" What happened to them :(

Very interresting. Can't wait to read more!

Oh boy

Oh boy

I can't wait to see what happens next! Will be waiting. :D

But why?

(Sorry for my sorry excuse of a reviews. I tend to give more comments then I do reviews, but anyways, this story is great. I checked your profile, and I'll be reading the rest of your stories after this. :D )

I'm still a bit confused on whether Rylee and Ryan actually knows what's going on. Or they're just going in blind. o.o

O.O Oh no. :/ (No, I'm not being sarcastic) Um... Is this based of Rick Riordan's novels? CAUSE I LOVE THE "KANE CHRONICLES SERIES" AND "PERCY JACKSON SERIES". Don't even get me started on the Heroes of Olympians. XDDDD If you haven't read them yet, you should! They're all real good. Anyways, gotta see what happens next. So on to the next one!