|Reviews for Salt Water|
| Natari Mirumura 1/9/13 . chapter 1
A lovely and vivid piece. I like how this poem said what it wanted to say, and just did so naturally. Almost effortlessly. Amazing job, keep it up :D
| Ygg 1/5/13 . chapter 1
Very tragic words but creatively molded into a nicely flowing poem! There's an unsettling truth to them to which perhaps many people may relate to. Great work I must say!