|Reviews for Trapped|
| Lonnie Long 1/7/13 . chapter 2
Well, you certainly have an imagination on you. It's good that you like to thoroughly describe things. I'd just find different ways of doing so in a way that's more natural, opposed to flat-out saying, "He wore this and looked like this and...etc," so it's more smooth, you know?
But keep it up. The more you write, the better and better you'll get. :)