Some of this is quite clever and I rather like the idea of the project as a whole. If I were to offer criticism, I might suggest that you should try to focus and clarify your writing. You're quite good at conveying emotion, mood, tone and feeling, but you have yet to really create a character or tell a story. You've been very successful at conveying feeling, but you should try to give the audience a reason to feel.

Don't take that criticism too harshly. You've got potential. Keep at it and good luck meeting your goal!

Hey! I won't pretend like I have anything especially helpful to say in this review (lol) but I like your idea, the one-post-a-day thing, and I'll be following it :). I've got a couple of ideas about what you want to do, but I don't want to mess up the initiative. You could PM me if you're interested and we'll talk about it. Whether or not you do, I still love this. So, please, keep going :D

Neolion.