Wow! Again I am amazed at your talent to capture me with your words! Length is obviously not a determining factor in whether or not a story is good when you write. Despite the length, it captured me right away in the beginning and held me till the end, wrapping me up in the words and the was beautiful and breathtaking! Now, I think I noticed a couple of typos and other things, but they were so minute that I hardly remember them. The wonder of the story made the minor mistakes insignificant. Wonderful job!