This is absolutely amazing. It is so raw and beautiful. You clearly have a talent for writing. Please pursue it. I can't tell you how well you convey emotions in this short piece. Terrific. Absolutely terrific. Good job. :)

I will not lie. This one almost made me cry. Words, words, words. I just can't find the words to describe what this made me feel. Just...wow...It was amazing!

Brilliant :)