|Reviews for Aegis|
| hotwinglover 5/3/13 . chapter 19
How would they have known that Rika was Aegis if she used her powers? They don't know that Aegis has force field powers.
| hotwinglover 4/20/13 . chapter 18
I don't like how Aegis's life is spilling into Rika's. Or vice versa.
| InfiniteMaze 4/14/13 . chapter 1
I liked your super hero story! The first chapter is a very good opener, and now I have 16 more chapters to read!
| hotwinglover 4/13/13 . chapter 17
That was kind of funny.
| hotwinglover 4/5/13 . chapter 16
That was a nice conversation. I would like to see another like this.
| hotwinglover 3/30/13 . chapter 15
This chapter shows a lot about Aegis limits. Very interesting...
| h earthserpent 3/24/13 . chapter 14
:l uh...well it was an interesting chapter for sure. bring on the next one.
| hotwinglover 3/23/13 . chapter 14
I wonder if Rika smokes because she's a superheroine. The stress must be really big. But she seems to make it work.
| hotwinglover 3/20/13 . chapter 13
Does Rika use her powers for good because she loves the thrill, the fame, or because she wants to be a hero? Because it's starting to seem like she's not a good superhero, and Rika's doubting herself too.
| hotwinglover 3/16/13 . chapter 12
I like chapters like this. I mean, for the Champions, you can put in personal AND action and still have some time for other stuff in the chapter. But it's harder for Aegis. I really appreciate chapters like this. Write more!
| hotwinglover 3/9/13 . chapter 11
I think that if Rika was never a superhuman, she would have never met the Champion. If she never did that, she would have never met Kevin and decided she didn't want to hang with snobs. If Rika never did that, she would have never met ger friends now, and she would be concerned with the League. Basically, her powers shaped her current life.
| earthserpent 3/2/13 . chapter 10
:D Wooo good chapter. keep it up.
| hotwinglover 3/2/13 . chapter 10
Sometimes I forget that this is a story at its beginning. It's only the tenth chapter, and we've had like, three plot complications.
| earthserpent 2/23/13 . chapter 9
:D bring on the next one.
| hotwinglover 2/23/13 . chapter 9
It's nice to see Aegis again.
Can't she concentrate her shield into a disk under her foot and manipulate it for her to fly?