How would they have known that Rika was Aegis if she used her powers? They don't know that Aegis has force field powers.

I don't like how Aegis's life is spilling into Rika's. Or vice versa.

I liked your super hero story! The first chapter is a very good opener, and now I have 16 more chapters to read!

That was kind of funny.

That was a nice conversation. I would like to see another like this.

This chapter shows a lot about Aegis limits. Very interesting...

:l uh...well it was an interesting chapter for sure. bring on the next one.

I wonder if Rika smokes because she's a superheroine. The stress must be really big. But she seems to make it work.

Does Rika use her powers for good because she loves the thrill, the fame, or because she wants to be a hero? Because it's starting to seem like she's not a good superhero, and Rika's doubting herself too.

I like chapters like this. I mean, for the Champions, you can put in personal AND action and still have some time for other stuff in the chapter. But it's harder for Aegis. I really appreciate chapters like this. Write more!

I think that if Rika was never a superhuman, she would have never met the Champion. If she never did that, she would have never met Kevin and decided she didn't want to hang with snobs. If Rika never did that, she would have never met ger friends now, and she would be concerned with the League. Basically, her powers shaped her current life.

:D Wooo good chapter. keep it up.

Sometimes I forget that this is a story at its beginning. It's only the tenth chapter, and we've had like, three plot complications.

:D bring on the next one.

It's nice to see Aegis again.

Can't she concentrate her shield into a disk under her foot and manipulate it for her to fly?