This one brought out your poetically conventional side. Your use of alliteration was awesome, and while the poem felt aimless I suppose it reflects the tone of the poem overall. Besides the typo I specifically love the last line, your choice of words really helped produce the imagery for me. Lovely poem FeatheryFlow!

This made me think of my poem "Golden Bird" because of the wing element. This is like another side, if the bird flying away would say something back. :)

A halo? Did someone die? Or are they so pure it's like a halo around their head? Dreams such in daydreaming or succeeding in dreams of life? Interesting. I may have missed the point