THERE'S NO NEXT BUTTON! *dies* I am loving this story to pieces. I'd ask you to check out my stuff, but I can't be bothered logging in so... If your bored out of your wits and have nothing better to do, go check out The Shadow of Nothingness.

Does anything phase these guys? They're traveling the country in a cheap van with little money andthey nearly die at everywhere they go!

I wonder how vampires came to be in this universe...

Oh, wow Lisa! Part of me hopes she gets raped. And part of me hopes she's okay. So conflicted!

So, does Raven sense the animals or does she call for them and they come?

I liked this chapter. Not too much advancement personality-wise, but plot-wise.

since new users can't seem to send PM's i'll state my item idea's in the review box. feel free to get rid or whatever with this once you've seen.

1. a Origami Figure
2. A Book of Nursery Rhymes

I did notice that their way of travel was inefficient. Maybe the keys can help them. Or maybe it has some mystic value.

The plot is kinda slowing down and becoming more Lisa centered. Going with the flow must be interesting for a writer. You know a good 'teens caught up in a battleground' would be interesting that is while they are in a city a battle between some heros and some villain comes about and they get caught in the fray etc as one of your action themes. Time to chase a macguffin _U

This chapter went deep. Well, it looks like they'll never stay in a town longer than a few days because of Grant. The only reason they haven't left Charlotte yet is because Eric and Lisa need to recharge.

Aw, c'mon! They find the one place that they were happy with and it wasn't even real! I wonder where they will go next.

This one incident has just changed my entire opinion on Grant... I hope Lisa's okay.

I want them to stay! They seem so happy there! What if they set up a place there, then follow leads around the country, then leave? It'll be HQ town.

If Lisa can understand animals, can she understand all languages?

Hmm, I'm feeling that this plot's been getting slower and slower. The idea was originally Raven oriented at origin, but I'm not seeing a lot of her abilities. I'm not seeing what she can do, her true feelings, her true personalities, her characterization. You need to focus more on stuff like that.

I had a feeling this would be a chapter with a fight.

Will Eric ever master magic? With two magic-ers, who knows what could happen!?