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| Reviews for Charmed to the Sea |
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   CaitieCait101 1/9/13 . chapter 1Hi, can I use this as song lyrics and post a video of me singing this, please? I love this, this is so amazing. CaitieCait101 |
| PiratePrincessSarah 1/8/13 . chapter 1 Me like! XD I love the rhyming! AWESOME! |
| Krystal Watters 1/6/13 . chapter 1 I quite like narrative poems which rhyme, and this is quite good. Knowing that rhyme schemes are constraining like a corset I'll leave out my usual complaints about detail. The last three stanzas though, I felt could be a little more clear without changing much of the rhythm. Did she become a fish or a mermaid? |
