|Reviews for Vittorio|
| ThinkPi 2/8/13 . chapter 1
My favorite poem from you yet! Simple but executed well, at least in my opinion. What I like most is how it flowed, you went from description to past memory to how it affects you in the present time to doubt to realization (which carried on for some time, you really drew out this climactic feeling) and ultimately to resolution. That itself is what I find wonderful about poetry, being able to tell a story in just a few lines. I really liked this one, you carried out the concept extremely well! You're creatively talented, that's for sure.
Though...save some periods for the fishes ;D
| KaylaHeart 1/6/13 . chapter 1
"Your name delights me, and excites me.." In a bizarre way, that applied to me just today. Good job!