ok i really like this chapter because idk how to explain it? but like how when you wear a bracelet you cant use your powers, thats a pretty good idea :D

omf this chapter gets really good! i like how the kids are kind of like supernatural and all have their own talents! i think its very creative.

ok when it says "Let go of me you drunken asshole." you should put a comma between me and you. ( XD.)
and then you should combine some sentences, because in some parts, it doesnt flow well. overall it was pretty good!

ok so at the top it says "paste your docum" and at the end it says "ent here..." so i think you should erase that. there are also a few spacing mistakes, but that's not too important. its very interesting and yeah.

I am thrilled that you're writing again and I'm really liking this new story! There's vibes of the Avengers and Maximum Ride, and Slater looks like a promising protagonist.

Tam

I read the first three chapters, hoping there would be more soon! I love the development of the characters, and I think it's a surprisingly known plot, but at the same time it's different in your own perspective. I can't wait to read more ;)