|Reviews for Just A Kid|
| studioworking 5/8/13 . chapter 4
ok i really like this chapter because idk how to explain it? but like how when you wear a bracelet you cant use your powers, thats a pretty good idea :D
| studioworking 5/8/13 . chapter 3
omf this chapter gets really good! i like how the kids are kind of like supernatural and all have their own talents! i think its very creative.
| studioworking 5/8/13 . chapter 2
ok when it says "Let go of me you drunken asshole." you should put a comma between me and you. ( XD.)
and then you should combine some sentences, because in some parts, it doesnt flow well. overall it was pretty good!
| studioworking 5/8/13 . chapter 1
ok so at the top it says "paste your docum" and at the end it says "ent here..." so i think you should erase that. there are also a few spacing mistakes, but that's not too important. its very interesting and yeah.
| Tamoirah Pevensie 1/7/13 . chapter 1
I am thrilled that you're writing again and I'm really liking this new story! There's vibes of the Avengers and Maximum Ride, and Slater looks like a promising protagonist.
| LongToBeLikeYou 1/6/13 . chapter 3
I read the first three chapters, hoping there would be more soon! I love the development of the characters, and I think it's a surprisingly known plot, but at the same time it's different in your own perspective. I can't wait to read more ;)