|Reviews for Looking Down|
| MotherYggdrasil 1/6/13 . chapter 1
I often struggle with the same thing, its something that through time and wisdom will start to melt away. I love that line "of what i couldn't do that you could so easily" that line by itself gives the reader something that she/he can put their own personal experience into, it leaves it open for us.
One mistake though fourth line I think "one" is suppose to be "on"...
I really enjoyed this poem!