this is harsh and beautiful and amazing.

This is really beautifully written. The imagery and emotion are very powerful, and you have a wonderful gift for metaphor. Thank you so much for the review!

This is my favourite one of your poems to date. The imagery is just completely epic and the message in the poem is just so clear. I could have cried whilst reading it, but I was to enthralled by the words that it halted the tears. You should be very, very proud of this.

Interesting. When a person CARES ABOUT YOU they TRY to listen TO YOU in the best way that they can with the information that you give them. That is all that I have to add right now.