|Reviews for Why Me?|
| leavesfallingup 5/15/13 . chapter 10
I tried the grocery store just before midnight, but the cops caught me! I guess it was because I was wearing those light-up shoes...
Anyway, it seems that Ty's life is about to become even more complicated. Hopefully Maurice and his buddies underestimate her? Still, the poor girl needs to catch a break.
I forgive you for taking so long. As penance, you only have to write the next three chapters in the next three days. I think that I am being very generous, don't you?
| Jason Bloom 5/14/13 . chapter 10
Fantastic story, but two requests: More. Faster.
Keep writing, I'll sure as fucking hell keep reading, so long and thanks for all the fish.
| Michelle Kat 5/12/13 . chapter 10
YAY A NEW CHAPTER! Red really does sound cute I accidentally started calling him wittled Wed widing hood. LOL! And seriously, a Teddy bear?! It had better been a damn cute bear! And Drew, u silvered tongued devil u, quit teasing peoplewith yur sexyness! Lets see... I wanna know more about our MANSLUT Dante. Like write a a portion of a chapter with just him, like maybe him thinking while working out! I'm sure we'd all like that mental image. And I got a question, u never really mentioned a Mrs. Rizzo. Is the brothers' mom alive or is she dead? I've been meaning to ask but I kept forgetting. That should be it.
| Guest 5/12/13 . chapter 10
Well hello again.I just finished chapter ten and I'm feeling the lull but that's ok. I'm assuming it's necessary to progress. YAY FOR 3 CHAPTERS IN LESS THAN A MONTH! Aww the guys are so protective, it's adorable. I love Fred. Just yes. I totally thought the bear was a bomb too. I would like to see some more background on Ty and more character as well as world building. I want to know kinda where they live, what's typical... Oh and the POV THING AGAIN. Whose the young kid and maurice? I enjoy this story so much more than I Should. My strange addiction. Thanks for introducing shady btw! No smoking ty its bad though! Umm ya more of the rizzos please and kick ass word fights. I love the teddy beat thing though it was funny. And how Ty oh so casually brought up Fred maybe being gay. I laughed so hard. Sorry about your 34 children. I'm sure you still have a great figure:P and maybe you'll get your own show for beating out 19 and counting! Jk but yeah as soon as you finish, more stories! I will definitely read them. bye!-the girl whose running out of witty tag lines and needs to make an account soon
| Guest 5/12/13 . chapter 9
Hey therrrr! Ugh I'm so sorry I didn't review chapter 9! I've just been crazy busy but in doing it now before I read chapter 10:) oh and happy belated birthday. Mine just happened too. And no u really don't have that bad of a birthday. Mines on columbine, hitlers b day and national weed day. So many weed jokes. Anyhow I liked this chapter, not a ton of action but I liked the part where Ty figuratively kicks the brinettes ass. A few spelling mistakes but nothing big. I was slightly confused around the grandfather part, maybe it was just me but the sentences didn't flow quite right. Also, whose Bellini? You mentioned him when Dante just finished talking to vladimir and I was confused cuz I was like, isn't his name Vladimir pellegrino? Anyway also could you do something to show when the POV changes, it was a little confusing. I'm super excited to find out what the deal is with her grandpa! Also, I love that the brothers are still getting along, but all the characters have maintained their original personality. No SUPER sappy romance:) on that note I'm coming up with a name for an account and I think by later this week I'll have one! Not that I write, just read and review:)I'll be posting again in a min so catch u later figuratively speaking-the girl trying to drag her but out of bed to go shower while multitasking and doing this
| yeoz 4/29/13 . chapter 1
I was so bloody excited when i saw that you updated! Amazing by the way, but no surprise there, you are an EXTRAORDINARY WRITER ! )
| Locyn Nyvar 4/28/13 . chapter 9
I love this. Ty is just so much fun and its never ever boring.
| Michelle Kat 4/27/13 . chapter 9
Wow this chapter had me fueled with different emotions . That slutty bitch and her toy bitch got on my nerves the minute I noticed their existence! And that dude with the V name, ain't got shit worthy clue on how to spell or pronounce it, he needs a good hard kick in the balls. oh, almost forgot : Dante, YOU FILTHY MANSLUT! I WOULD HAVE THOUGHT YOU HAD BETTER TASTES IN WOMEN THAN THAT ADREANA HORNY SLUTTY SKANKASUAROUS REX! There my ranting is done! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! XD
| leavesfallingup 4/27/13 . chapter 9
I wondered when the rival gang you referred to in the summary would come in. It seems that nothing ever goes easy for Ty, though she seems well fashioned to fight back.
| Guest 4/21/13 . chapter 8
Hey so I just realized something as I retread this: you mention shady... Who the fluffnarks is he?! Part of the gang? Lovin the despicable me ringtone, my frien has the same one. I was just thinking maybe the hints about Carlo being gay in the chapter would be a bit more effective more subtly but idk, it might ruin the whole effect so you probably shouldn't listen to a thing I say. Thanks-the girl writing really long sign offs until she thinks of a screen name for an account
| Guest 4/16/13 . chapter 8
Heyooo! Aww well shucks, now I feel special too! Glad I could actually help but I only speak Spanish and some french with some random Japanese stuff not Italian. Damn shame too, it's a beautiful language. Anyway because of your last comment I keep picturing a chocolate covered strawberry with a face as you. Sorry but not really. Ok so you want less praise... I'm sure you're really a very ugly person? Nah jk but anyway I TOTALLY CALLED CARLOS BEING GAY. Nailed it!Hmmm, him and Fred? I was kinda confused by the whole Tina thing and I would like to know more a bout Ty's dad. Also the flow was a bit lost going into this chapter. Loved Jimmy's outburst though here and I'm glad we're getting to know the guys more individually, as well as Carlos. Who'se next of the brothers? I personally still love luca. Ugh sorry for writing a ton. I have no social life so I rant to my maybe Internet friend whose stories are really cool and should be read by masses that I've never met and could be a total creep-obviously a perfect description of you-. What fun. Maybe I'll get off my lazy but an make an account to review with(gasp) OFFICIALLY! Anyway keep writing and ignore the distracting birds, creatures and wonderful magic that I call food. Thanks:) -the girl questioning her sanity for ranting to a total stranger and breaking every rule about Internet safety by doing so
| mylittleprincess 4/11/13 . chapter 8
awesome and very funny story, updatefast please:)
| yeoz 4/10/13 . chapter 8
Oh my goodness ! That was amazing! Please update soon, or i just might go crazy waiting,:)
| Michelle Kat 4/9/13 . chapter 8
Yea! There's a cute gay person! I love gay people, they are so awesome! Anyways, I really giggled my ass off reading this chapter, it made me feel better( I'm sick so they had me leave school early) humor is the best medicine! I can't wait for the next chapter! XD
| leavesfallingup 4/9/13 . chapter 8
It seems that Ty has a lot more background than the gangsters suspect. If Robert finds out he will probably contact her parents and pursue the match in that way... which will only serve to make her dig her heels in even more. Another fun chapter, though I look forward to reading the story through from beginning to end so that I don't lose the entire flow between chapters.