I love the last two lines of this poem as well as the overall piece in general. I also noticed a change in your writing's format from that last time I read one of your works. Splendid - indeed. Amazing job with the rhyming and everything else! Keep it up :D

Great rhyming here. Keep writing! :)
Anna :)

Love the tone and rhyme! It all flows smoothly too. Not so easy to poetically describe, but you did a good job in portraying grief. I like the way you describe these feelings as lingering deep below the surface, left for dead. Well written!

Your rhymes are perfect! This is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the good work and writing your amazing poems! :D