Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeellllllllll lllllllllllllllllllllll...

You wrote this like you had experience! Good job!
XD No really, you did. It's a bit creepy how good you made this, from the eyes of the murderer. XD

THATS WHY IM FAVING! XD

LOVE this poem! It's a perfect marriage (oops! no pun intended, I swear) between the woman's train of thought, her story, and the actual events taking place. Yes, it's dark, but that makes it more intriguing and ups the shock value which is a powerful in literature.

:O ...WHAT HAPPENS TO BLONDIE?...!

-MINUS THE BEARS