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Ed Harley 1/10/13 . chapter 1Great title, sharp story. Dark would be an understatement. It’s easy to picture the scenes you describe. A suggestion: you could remove some unnecessary words and use contractions more. Examples: ‘I have buried him this morning.’- I buried him this morning. ‘I suppose I should have said some’- should’ve |