Very good writing so far! I like it! :)

Hi it's me again :) I'm really following this story now and can't wait for you to update more :) I actually imagined the Nijuhakoge move that Seiryu did in my head hahaha. You write good in terms of fight scenes.

The plot here's getting more deeper in my opinion. Still you have to work on the typos, but all in all I like it. It reminds me of fantasy games I've played years back.

Cool a sequel :) hope to see more action :D