Epic! As always! I love the sound of this Multiverse! I think we should hear a bit more about it 'cuz it's awesome!
Sandy

The dark shy?

Epic! I'm glad we all know more about Majik now! Makes things easier to understand! But one thing . . . "Most over sorts of Majik died out a bit". Do you mean most other? Or is there a type of Majik called "Over Majik" that died out a bit?
Sandy

Coolness! Yeah, change of tone, but it's good! So yeah, love it! :)
And I also realised that I didn't review the other chapters! They were all AWESOME! I love the way they're funny, and you get a good impression of people's characters! Sandy :)

I really do love it and it seems like my kind of thing! I'm addicted with anything to do with the paranormal haha!
I can't wait for the next part! I was told by the author for constructive criticism but I can't really think of any! Maybe a little more description of each place like just little details now and again

Cool a unicorn ! I love those and this story!

Cool! A good start, if not very long, and the story sounds really interesting! It's good that we know a lot about Harriet before the story really starts because it will make it easier to understand later. I look forward to the next chapter!
SandyJ