|Reviews for Hybrid Angel|
| Licorice Tears 3/14/13 . chapter 1
I apologze in advance for harshness.
What are you DOING HERE IF YOU AREN'T A GOOD WRITER? Although fictionpress is an area of free writing, it would be nice if you got a beta. If you get flames, I wonder who's fault it was. Regardless of an authors wishes and likability, people want to read GOOD fiction.
| The.Seldom.Samurai 1/9/13 . chapter 1
Not Bad. Could use some more scenery details.