|Reviews for Untouchable|
| we've got obsessions 3/15/13 . chapter 1
"I burn my bridges
because I prefer to swim,
and I rise from the ashes
like a phoenix."
this is definitely my favorite stanza.
| Gabriel Lyman 2/3/13 . chapter 1
I love the spaceing and the line breaks that make it flow so wonderfully. The subject matter rips into the heart, like bullets fired from a semi automatic weapon one for each stanza. I'm always a big fan of phoenix metaphors...I love this piece