| Reviews for Untouchable |
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we've got obsessions 3/15/13 . chapter 1"I burn my bridges because I prefer to swim, and I rise from the ashes like a phoenix." this is definitely my favorite stanza. |
Gabriel Lyman 2/3/13 . chapter 1I love the spaceing and the line breaks that make it flow so wonderfully. The subject matter rips into the heart, like bullets fired from a semi automatic weapon one for each stanza. I'm always a big fan of phoenix metaphors...I love this piece |