| Reviews for To Go Back in Time |
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Oci Oceana 5/5/13 . chapter 7Sad chapter :'( But really good :D |
Guest 4/18/13 . chapter 2 I feel as though you need to elaborate more on why those specific two were chosen. If it were real life the government wouldn't send two random teenagers back in time to stop a major event. They'd pick people suited to the task. (In saying that I've only read the first two chapters so you might go into more detail later) But say for example she was getting the scholarship for being an expert in American history, then she'd be suited towards the task, plus it lets the readers get to know the characters a little better- it never hurts to know a little bit about the main, plus it adds to the imagery of the story. The love interest on the other hand can remain as sexy and mysterious as one so desires ;) Hope that helps :) best of luck with future chapters. |
Oci Oceana 4/15/13 . chapter 6Hi! Great chapter :) and I liked the thing about Lincoln :D |
AnonymousNoOne 4/12/13 . chapter 5An update! Yay! Finally! Pretty awesome chapter, though uneventful(if you can call meeting Edwin Booth and nearly getting pancaked by a carriage 'uneventful') but awesome just the same. |
Oci Oceana 3/26/13 . chapter 5:) Haha... write another chapter soon please! |
Oci Oceana 3/19/13 . chapter 4ooh! Please write another chapter soon please! |
Lillia Jane Marshes 2/3/13 . chapter 3Hmm...interesting... When you said Matt had golden spiky hair I immediately pictured a blonde David Tennant ;) Lol Write you little author person! Write! |
Nintendo Fan 101 1/25/13 . chapter 3I hope so, because Time Travel is an interesting topic! |
Nintendo Fan 101 1/22/13 . chapter 2I love stories about time travel! |