Cameron's? Well okay then.
Why is she so concerned about the vulture? Well, I would be too, but still...
Oh, update soon!

Ahh... Finally, something happens to perfect Trinity. I know a girl named Trinity. Except she's nice.
You know, I like the names in this book.
Most names I've seen in stories are pretty common, like Jessica or John. Not really, but you get what I mean. Overly used names. But yours doesn't have that ;)

Trinity, you spoiled brat you.

Trinity sounds really boring. I'm just gonna say that.

You know, vultures are never a good sign. Neither are crows. Even if you meant nothing by it, I'm gonna let my mind take me where it wants to go on what that could possibly mean XD

Ah, Laney. Still a typical girl I see. Wanting to be friends with the popular girl.
Ugh, clones. It's unfortunate that there are those kinds of people in real life.

I like this. It's totally not what I was expecting. It has humor, and she actually told them how she knew what was going to happen unlike most stories where there would be some stupid reason as to where they wouldn't. So nice job on making it funny and not cliche. Oh, and I liked the actual writing too :) I went to an arts school once

Ohkay. You're awesome. Much...amazing here. Big difference between this chapter and the previous ones. :)

This is interesting. Way too short and lacking some depth, but interesting.

I like this. Please continue it. C: