|Reviews for The Sentinel|
| ToSailAStreamOfStars 1/16/13 . chapter 1
Very intriguing. The mood is established quickly, and the style you've used for the combat is unique. It could definitely be more intense,but overall a very good prologue. Some sentences read awkwardly, but that will smooth out as you write more, don't worry. I hope to read more soon.
| rovalo 1/12/13 . chapter 2
AHHHHH I LOVE THIS, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! :D XXXXXX