Very very interesting religious piece. A lot of religious poetry doesn't question God in this way, so I found this very refreshing. I feel as though I hold a similar point of view. What should you believe when you don't know what to believe? I love your works :)

I like this poem. I totally can relate to it. I grew up in the church and had to make the decision to either join or not. I did not and then five years later I ended up figuring things out and actually looking to have my own personal relationship with God and not my parents or friends or pastors or whoevers. You have to make your own decisions and you have to seek on your own. I am not saying it will take five years, but you will know. Do not let other ppls words confuse you. Just look to God himself to show you.

I loved your piece. Write on!

interesting, interesting

I like how you've expressed your opinion on the subject matter. Very well done. Keep writing.
Anna :)