Again, this is short but so effective. Ughughughugh I should stop reading because I hate you more with every poem. :P

disregard...for...father very interesting.

with a summary like shopping list and a tittle like farther i wasn't sure what to expect. But the small subtle rhyming and the flow was a nice read along with your strange words which made everything go nicely together.! Hope to read more from you! Would you mind checking out my recent poem or story? And tell me what you think!

Awesome. I like how it's short and to the point, but it's still so full of imagery.