|Reviews for Ghost|
| DylanSonnleitner 1/14/13 . chapter 1
I love the way this is written. The way the breaks make it feel like a cross cut film or an extended movie trailer to a film I'd definitely be at least intrigued to look into.
The voice. The voice sounds interesting and yet I can't yet decide whether it's her own instinctual thoughts manifested...I particularly loved the line "Be methodical" followed by the need for water and to find a stream.
I read this with urgency, like I was meant to run. I also loved how sensory it felt. Good job. Write more.