| Reviews for The Girl On The Wall |
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Watercatcher7984 5/11/13 . chapter 16Thank you for updating! I was dying to know more, which I still am so update quicker this time! |
AoiLegend 5/9/13 . chapter 16I think this story is pretty awesome and I like your writing style, although your grammar and spelling is a bit off. Also, this is interesting for me to read since I'm living the U.S and there are a lot of differences in our vocabulary and customs, and so I have to try and figure out what some of the stuff is. Like I had no clue why after all of the text messages they would put an X, I didn't figure out till like 4 of 5 chapters in that it meant kisses. We don't send kisses in our texts in the U.S really... |
bombshellbecky 5/8/13 . chapter 16ugghhh, can they please meat already? Please :DDDDDDD? |
Terri-ific 5/7/13 . chapter 16I think I love Connor...my husband probably won't be happy about that, but all well. He has got to be the sweetest, most dedicated guy ever. I can't wait until your next update! Please, please hurry! |
Terri-ific 5/7/13 . chapter 12i was just waiting for this! i had a feeling, or a hope, that Connor would insist on her coming to live with them! You're doing a great job with this story. i'm enjoying it a lot. |
Terri-ific 5/7/13 . chapter 3this story is pretty good. This chapter had my stomach fluttering. I'm a sap for a love story. |
CRSmith 3/21/13 . chapter 15Please update more! |
bombshellbecky 3/21/13 . chapter 15waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh hhh? what just happened? oh my gosh... you can't leave it at that! please update soooonnnnn |
BrownEyedCutie99 3/21/13 . chapter 15Is Ashley's mom going to hurt her more when she sees her again? Will Ashley finally go to Connor? Keep up the good work! |
i try it not 3/9/13 . chapter 14There are so many mysteries! I just found your fic, and Read the entire thing today. I love it, and I'm looking forward to updates; you've captured me! However, i think that there are a few discrepancies as I've been reading. The main one I remember is that in the beginning, Ash talks about how she's afraid her one friend will leave her. But then she says, she knows that she'll never leave and they're there for each other, etc. Just thought I'd point that out. |
bombshellbecky 3/9/13 . chapter 14oh my gosh, what a chapter! This was so intense! I have a feeling Ryan's her half brother...am i right?... wait don't tell me. LOL. Uggh, can't wait for the next chapter, please please please update soon! |
CRSmith 3/9/13 . chapter 14Me wanteth longeth chapters-eth ;D |
Woww 2/24/13 . chapter 13 Ok so love all of these chapters! Keep writing this story it's just amazing! |
BirdyTakeFlight 2/25/13 . chapter 13I LOVE THIS POST MORE OR THE PUPPY GETS IT! ...not really cause I love puppies but PLZ POST MOAR -Birdy |
BookLover-xx 2/24/13 . chapter 13I love it! Updste when you can :) |