A good story with some fabulous characters. A few grammatical errors but anyone who doesn't have any grammatical errors in their work needs to find a life. My main concern was the lack of spacing in the beginning... WOW that was hard to follow (blush blush). I got a piece of paper and used it as a guide haha. Other than that, a wonderful read. Well done.

That's really good. How did you get the idea? Randomly? I loved it!