|Reviews for Collide|
| MythicBae 5/13/13 . chapter 25
I really enjoyed your story. It had well rounded characters, a great plot, and it was really well-developed. I'm gad you shared it here. It was great.
| chocoyum4 4/28/13 . chapter 25
I love this story! ) I can't believe it doesn't have more reviews! I laughed, I cried, I grinned and giggled like an idiot! It was wonderful! Thank you very much for sharing this with the world! )
| MidnightGhost434 4/17/13 . chapter 25
This was incredible. I felt as if I was reading an actual published novel. I love how you made the characters real people and not perfect heroes, it made reading this so much more enjoyable. I would love to see a sequel but if you feel as if you've told all there is to tell in this, then I will be dissapointed but will accept it. Once again, this was amazing.
| bookworm121197 4/17/13 . chapter 25
I didn't have time to review at the time I read the story but I thought this totally deserved the review. I love Double Blind Study and fell in love with them all upon reading. Lenny and Luke are so well suited for each other, also. I was a mix of emotions reading this - tears when Lenny left the airport, laughter at the bands antics and happiness when Duke found true love. This is my favourite FictionPress story to date, maybe even favourite story I've read ever because I was totally captivated, which made me read within the day xxc
| Des 4/16/13 . chapter 25
Beautifully written. You pulled me into the storyline immediately. I was never bored. And I fell in love with every single character. I love love love Luke. Sigh ...
If this doesn't become a series I'll forever be in mourning.
| vickifay 4/14/13 . chapter 25
Aww, the ending was just the band! Yay :D I knew Luke and Lennny would get married, but vacationing in Hawaii? For a month? Maybe Lenny took up surfboarding, when she wasn't busy doing...other things ;D This was the perfect way to wrap it all up! This story is one of the best I've ever read online, and you deserve way more reviews than you've gotten. How could anyone just ignore this masterpiece? Definitely of favorite of mine now :) If there's a sequel, make sure to let me know!
| vickifay 4/14/13 . chapter 24
Yes, I knew Len would see sense eventually! *cheers* It just took her a few days, is all. I can't believe there's only one chapter left! D: Reading this has been an amazing ride, even if I didn't tell you as much in the beginning. I do hope the band's in the last chapter _
| Guest 4/11/13 . chapter 15
Oh dear...I figured Luke would want to propose sometime, and now that he's made the confession to Sway I know he's going to do it. Lenny'll probably balk at that though, since she's already trying to cut herself away. Poor girl.
| Fragment Of Your Imagination 4/12/13 . chapter 25
It's over? TTTT
This story was legendary. I mean really. Sorry I didn't review earlier, I just started reading this a few days ago...
Your work is amazing! Flawless! Is there going to be a sequel? :D or a spin-off? Can't wait for your next story! xD
| RandomDalmatian326 4/12/13 . chapter 25
I liked that you let your characters make mistakes throughout the (shall I say) novel. It shows that even if you want them to kiss and marry and have sex, they ARE people... And people make mistakes.
They protect themselves. They curse at being a bystander when they wish they were the main character. They move on. They feel loss. They step up.
The bad times behind a character define who they truly are, and what they are made of. It is not in the good times that one sees a true character - no, in my belief, one sees true character or true maturity in the lowest points of their life.
Though at first it seemed a little soon of Lenny to forgive Luke, but the more I pondered it, the more it made sense. People have a tendency to be softer when concerning their first real love. They have a tendency to forgive their love, even if they fucked up immensely. That's why Lenny forgave- not only that, but because she had developed to do so.
I am truly happy at the ending, and I'm very glad you continued to spoil me with constant updates. Shall I hope to see the same on your next story? I really hope so.
I await patiently for your new work- and consider yourself followed.
| vickifay 4/12/13 . chapter 23
Yay, they've gotten off to a sort-of good start again! I had a hunch that Luke was going to try boarding with everyone else to get more into Lenny's world, and I was right. Maybe it'll help her soften up to him again. Their relationship isn't as impossible as she'd like to think.
Favorite line: "Yeah, Luke and I are bros now." I just love that Luke and Shane are bros and hang out now. They're great :D
| vickifay 4/12/13 . chapter 22
...and I was right. Damn, what a lot of shouting! And slapping xD Go Lenny! She deserves to be pissed after everything that's happened, especially that comment about her and Shane. What a low blow...
Maybe Lenny will be easier to talk to in the morning? I can only hope so.
| vickifay 4/12/13 . chapter 21
AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! Er, Double Blind Study, assemble xD But anyway, it's good the band has come back together to help Luke out of the mess he's made. Now that Lenny's seen the magazine and heard the song though, it may have the opposite effect. There's definitely going to be some drama when he arrives at the hotel!
| vickifay 4/12/13 . chapter 20
Gahh, you updated four times in like one day! On a roll, girl! xD I wonder how quickly that magazine is going to reach Len up in Alaska. Hopefully she gets at least another chapter of chill time before she sees it. As for Shane, I'm glad he's gotten turned around. I really haven't liked his character until now, so as long as he doesn't have any bad intentions I'll gladly watch him herd Ben away from Lenny. Seriously, he needs to stop trying for her. Luke will come back and apologize eventually...won't he? I hope.
| vickifay 4/11/13 . chapter 19
Poor, stupid Luke. Doesn't he know that getting drunk won't solve any of his problems? As for Ben, I don't trust him. He needs to back down and quit trying to get with Lenny. I've got a bad feeling about him. The others ono the trip seem pretty cool, though _