|Reviews for Pair 43|
| Dr. Crichton 2/23/13 . chapter 7
Awesome Story! please continue and don't let your fans wait too longer for the next Chapter!
| SugarandSpice90 2/18/13 . chapter 6
I am really enjoying reading your story. I hope you keep adding to it because I'll be checking back for more. There is just enough humor, just enough romance, and a perfect blend of suspense. I appreciate the forward progression without the sense of urgency/rushing. The only mechanical criticism I have is with your dialogue and use of quotes. It's "hello," I tell him. Not "hello." I tell him. it's just a minor thing and an easy fix. Great job!