This is absolutely and breathtakingly beautiful. Every metaphor and image you use is *so* original and yet so perfectly fitting for it's purpose, like it's not just quirkiness for the sake of it and sidhfsahoncdsioancosan I just loved this a ridiculous amount okay?

I was just stalking both of your accounts, looking for inspiration, and I came across this one, which I noticed I was meaning to leave a review for it when I first read it and I guess I never got round to it. This is one of my favourites, if not my actual favourite, of yours. I love how it has different meanings depending on the way you interpret it, and that's the best thing a writer can do. Okay, shutting up now, but ugh I just love everything you write so much. :')

Very beautiful. "and they've been seeding for a while" this is great stuff. Makes me want to ask who this apricot girl is. I've never heard any girl called that before, it kind of refreshing and descriptive.