This is an amazing story. There are a few spelling errors and such but that isn't much, everything has those simple errors, I simply can't wait for you to add more into this, It is quite amazing. I love it.

Dang.

Well definitely intriguing as I'll get out. It's so confusing and entrancing at the beginning O just have to know more! Please to continue, because I'm going to figure this out!

Kudos, loving it immensely!

It's a different experience when you switch the point of view from Matt to Silvia. It allows me to understand the story from both sides. I like how you added humor in an otherwise serious context. I'm definitely adding this story to my favorite list. :)

Aww, first his friends betrayed him and tried to kill him, now his parents want him dead too? I feel bad for Matt, he has quite a tough life. I'm interested about this tattoo that Matt has on his back and why it scares his parents? Heh, guess I have to read more to find out.

Great, now I get to understand the event from Death's side of the story. You added excellent details that really captivated my interest. Great job!

I'm curious as to why those people wanted Matt dead? Guess I'll have to read more to find out. Anyhow, you have great explanation about the event going on, and you really did a great job of portraying out the intended emotions. I was able to feel Matt's frustration and anger at his friends' betrayal. Good job!