Awesome, as always (: Ardal is so funny and crazy, I just love him. The little mental patient 3

Still awesome (: I wish it was longer, but it's so great to be able to read through from the start like this. You've got such a good premise and Ettie is so relate-able, I think she's great. I love Ardal's crazy, too ;D He's so mental, but cool at the same time. In a big anthropomorphic stalker kind of way. You deserve more reviews! xx

I love the rewrite so much (: this is great work! It's such a brilliant set up, I'm looking forward to seeing some more!