Despite your young age, you're actually a talented writer. You just need more experience in choosing better synonyms to provide an even more powerful impact on the reader. Either way, great job and keep up the good work :)

PS: Canada is yours huh? Well in a sense I guess you're right since we're influenced so much by you Americans xP

Hey, better poem then I could ever write.

Sorry an asshole broke your heart.

You're in 9th? There's not alot of people I know at that age who actually love someone; mostly, it's all just texting and crushes and stuff like that.

Hell, the only one I do know is me.

Great poem! Keep poetry-ing! XD
Thomas

A rather interesting poem filled with your anguish. While its wording may be amateur, the emotion behind it is mature and it takes skill to put emotion into words. Don't give up, you have the chance to become a great poet - after all, great poets have to start somewhere.
Xxx

Hmmm... I'm not really a 'poetry girl' but I liked this one. It was nice. Keep writing. It would also be appreciated if you could check out my story too. . but definitely keep writing. That was really good.