I know that feeling! I hate how they assume that because you're opyounger you don't know anything or immature. But this is a fantastic piece which cases all that frustration I feel when people assume that because I'm this age I won't understand what they're talking about, when the truth is the opposite. Great piece with some brilliant thought provoking lines and wonderful imagery and flow.

This makes me think. It really does. By the way I am NOT aging anyone. SERIOUSLY. By the way I am NOT above anyone NOR do I feel that way. REALLY. SERIOUSLY.

Loved the message behind this. It is very interesting and loved the poem itself.

Brilliant poem,
and i can relate to this, this seems to be happening more to me these days :/
Keep on reading and writing XD

Haha, I like this. I'm younger (compared to the other people on this site) but that doesn't mean I can't write good stories like the rest of us... So I agree.

yup! totally agree! Nice poem, write on!