love it! short and snappy :)

Longer chapters maybe?...

I think this is a great story, so keep at it. ;P

I like it! It's funny and you took me into the story right away to the point I was already wondering what she will do next! Keep going and good luck I hope to read a lot more :)

This sounds really great! You have a real talent for writing :)

I cannot wait for the next chapter! Pretty pretty please make it soon!

I really like how you've set up Tatum's character in this chapter; the erratic jumbled flow of her thoughts remind me of a friend of mine. Look forward to reading more in the future! :)