In the beginning and end the rhyme is nice and subtle, but there is a portion in the middle that feels a little forced. Nether the less, it was still a gorgeous work. I have a particular fondness for the last stanza.

I don't talk to myself, usually, but I feel you!

I like this! I love the last line! Nice piece.

For some reason, it reminds me of my favorite band's song, "Little Talks". It's sad, but it's not making me throw my Kindle across the room, so you're excellent.

Hermie