I really liked this, its different and made me feel like there is someone or something out there looking after us and loving us no matter what may happen.

Keep it up.

I like the straight forward simplicity in this one. A little different from your usual style but still nicely done. Your title keeps me guessing too.

What a beautifully written, spine-chilling salute to
the spirituality of attempted suicide! Only someone
who has been driven to the edge could appreciate the
fascinating smile of slashed wrists. Congratulations
on surviving such a harrowing journey, even if it was
made only in creative imagination.

This was, to be put simply, beautiful.

Very spiritually uplifting, giving hope for times when hope seems buried too deeply to truly believe in. Love the title too! It fits wonderfully well with the message of the poem. Great write!

This was really sweet!
I love writers who are verisitale with
their poems. (Cause sometimes, happy
is extremely difficult to pull off)

And I now know a new style of poetry
to play with. (:

I like the story you tell here. This is a neat form of poetry I think there is more creativity shown in these forms because there is a set amount of syllables and the goal is to be as effective as possible with your word choice. Rock on grrl!