I love this. its so sweet and descriptive and gives the reader a thorough impression of who they are and what they stand for.

Thought this was very well done! As someone who went through a similar situation, I can definitely empathize with the characters. Even if two people agree it can work, there are still other things: Christmas and Ramadan, eating pork or not, family opinions. It might be interesting to know some of the other stuff going on for them... how their parents felt, etc. Great job!

This is so lovely! There's this really nice warmth to your writing which makes it such a pleasure to read. Your dialogue is good and realistic enough whilst still keeping the romance in tact. Good job showing that love can transcend religion and the barriers it can sometimes put in place. I'll stop now but yeah, this is lovely and you should definitely keep writing and posting on here. :)

I really liked this! I thought it was beautiful! It is hard to be with someone who is on a dif. religion but love can def. help smooth things over. this was realistic and beautiful. Write on!