Makes me think.

This was so intense, loved the imagery! My favourite lines had to be: "bedhead of an ape: the hybrid of a forest man and his spoiled child" and "Our lazy hands breed lazy legs." Great piece, as always! :)

Very interesting, but once again, well written. It paints an intriguing picture, that's for sure.

Ooh, are you changing your style? :0

I liked the imagery with this. I was thinking of a bully and the victim...