Really good! But seriously, enough with the cliffhangers man!

I'd loved her - I think that should be 'I've'.
I didn't like Kylie. Because of how she was meant to be, but I don't think she was as believable as your other characters.
"And that's an insult to the giraffe." Hahahaha. :P
I liked this chapter. I like Aidan, he's cool. BUT GOD DAMNIT AIDAN GET IT TOGETHER. I dislike cliffhangers. I want more ASAP!

Awesome, of course. :D Cam and Callie asdfgfhjkjlk 3
You could write a chapter/story about Stella? Since you can't put it in the story.

I loved it, of course. I'm falling more and more in love with Aidan. But it seemed a bit rushed, and kinda random. Like, why did Hunter just appear? And why, when she was alone with her crush, did she run off with him? Sure, he's hot, but I think she should think about it a bit first.
Also, the line: "So, Tammy," He begin... Should read: "So, Tammy," he began.

Hm. It seems adorable so far, but be careful it doesn't become really cliché. I like Tammy already. And I may already be in love with Aidan.
QUESTION! Is the whole story going to be just this night?

I definitely think you should continue this story, i like it so far:)