I was going to give a really elaborate and constructive review, but damn it, this is so adorable that I'm speechless!

I love it, I love it, and I love it! Everything about it was so realistic, and despite the short length of this piece, you created a story with so much depth. I think this is brilliant, and you definitely deserve to be recognized as a writer! Congratulations on doing an impeccable job with this!

Oh my god, I love this , complete? :I *okay face*

Awesome! It wasn't chiche! XD Awesome! *hands cake*