omg! J was definitely not who i thought it would be, and that just added to the surprise :D nice cliffhanger!

Aw! That's so romantic!

LOL ah, we'll played Adalynn, well played

omg this is great :D As soon as I saw the name "Jamey" I was like o_o i think i know who he is!

nice story! It's getting interesting :D Going on to the next one (:

Good. Story so far. I will certainly continue to read this. Although j did notice a few grammar and spelling mishaps but so far very good.

Hey Elisabeth! :) I found it on here haha. THIS IS AMAZING THOUGH. Can't wait to see how it ends!

Wow, i really like it :) Adalynn (if thats how you spell it) is funny.