|Reviews for Heart with the silent voice|
| Desertfyre 1/24/13 . chapter 1
This invoked some good imagery. I believe that some commas at least could benefit the piece so that the reader will automatically slow down and pause in certain places. It would have more rhythm with some strategically placed commas.
Other than that, this was a very cool piece. :)
| SuzyDiego 1/23/13 . chapter 1
You have beautiful imagery in your poem however it took me a few reads before I began to see how your synopsis related to the material presented. It was a pleasant read.