And my grade on it was 105%. EAT THAT SUCKER!

Well screw you too! And it's FOR not FIR! Huh, someone should teach you to be nicer. What if I am an elementary school person? I still call it social studies. I would need to work my way up, and I don't need you haters to push me down! Why don't to get a life! If you want to give help, why don't you do it in a nicer manner?

This was not funny nor did I find it tragic, I just found typos and a spelling mistake. Everything's rushed, I'm pretty sure people didn't speak like that back then (they didn't say "yeah" or "heck", in other words they didn't speak like today's pre-teens), ESPECIALLY* somebody from a tribe. I don't think anybody cares what their names meant, myself included. What use would I have for that? The friend's death wasn't tragic at all it was just random and how exactly did they suddenly appear next to a cliff? There isn't enough background story for the characters and in the end I didn't care about them at all. It was so bad thag it was funny in the end.

I'm not trying to make you feel bad, I'm speaking the truth and this was just doesn't matter if you were "rushing", if you truly cared for this then you should have taken the time to work on it. There's no excuse for posting it as is you could have worked on it later.

Oh, and it's SOCIAL studies, not socail studies and if you're taking that class then I'm sure you're still in middle school so that would explain why you think "rushing" is an excuse fir posting this as bad as it was, and from the review I saw on this I can see that it was co-written, I couldn't care less if it was and I couldn't care less if you think I'm jealous because why would I be jealous for something as bad as this?

This wasn't meant to be a flame, nor is it an attempt at one but it just pisses me off when somebody thinks that "rushing" something is an excuse which is only an "excuse" somebody who isn't serious about their works uses just so they can post something so they can get reviews. Don't "rush" next time and actually work on the damn thing!

I love that story it sounds just like one I wrote oh yeah we wrote it together. I still like it!