"Her strength fading with each passing minute and yet she was too stubborn to just give up." Typo fixed.

"Ligeia held her baby girl with tears in her eyes. This little miracle was all hers, gifted to her by their sacred god Apollo." Typo fixed.

Hi, there! I'm from For the Love of English. Nice story. I like the Greek gods, and Ligeia is a unique name.

Wow, your story is really good! Although I have an idea on where it's heading, I'm excited to see your detail and storytelling!

P.S. Can we talk PM? I want to apologize. thanks in advance.

It's a great opening! You don't have any grammar or spelling mistakes, as far as I know, but I might have skipped a few. :D

This is wonderful! But you knew I'd say that.