Ooo... A prophecy of sorts! Very intriguing!
Keep up the great chapters!

Wheeee! This is getting INTENSE! Who is the self-proclaimed Lord of Midnight? Is he Aeraina's twin? (I think he is!) Can't wait til the next chappie!
I'm sleep-deprived. Can you tell? :P

I liked it!

Well! Quite the different direction than most of the stories that I've read... I like it! Nice and original. Looking forwards to the next chapter!
Keep up the awesome writing!

had a chance to read chapter two, so far im intrigued, i forget that im reading a online story i think im reading a book out of my kindle! haha. You leave alot of things to ambiguity, i like this cause it makes me want to read more, and Raina is just a spunky girl with a attitude and i enjoy her character. I'm interested to learn her backstory, why is her full name Aeraina? and why does she have to keep it a secret? looks like i'll just have to read chapter 3. ]

I like reviewing people's story by chapter, so can't wait to read 3!

Good start, i like the setting, it reminds me of eragon but in a very good way, its good territory to be walking in. i like the characters. and the dialouge really brings life to the story so far. I like dialouge heavy stories, but dont be afraid to get into the characters minds. cant wait for an update!